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Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
She looked up as a man walked out of the shadows - at a quick estimate, she reckoned that he was about as tall as a six foot three inch ...
Feb 6, 2007 -
Re: Fly Swatting
Actually I'm working on something about life in a bank. Good idea, though.
Feb 5, 2007 -
Re: Fly Swatting
More the same kind of stuff as seen in Fly Swatting Whit Monday, for so many just anther excuse to litter areas of Outstanding Natural Beauty with paper bags, holds ...
Feb 3, 2007 -
Re: Denying Dusk
This is really nice - you've handled blank verse rather well. The way you write, though, suggests that you might do better at slightly more formal types of poetry - ...
Feb 3, 2007 -
Re: The Journal of Martin Delver
This is very interesting, with some good ideas. :D The only problem I can see is that you can be a bit too clunky and awkward for something written in ...
Feb 3, 2007 -
Re: The Joys of Indoor Golf
Thanks! I'll get it up very soon.
Feb 3, 2007 -
Re: The Joys of Indoor Golf
I'm writing another one on Fly Swatting. Thanks.
Feb 2, 2007 -
Re: My first short story
You know my name... Reading this properly for the first time, this is damn good. There are some phrases in there that crack me up (the bag is catless now), ...
Feb 2, 2007 -
Re: The Joys of Indoor Golf
A tribute to P.G. Wodehouse: The Joys of Indoor Golf I was once accused, when I was found mixing nitro-glycerine in the potting shed, of having nothing decent to occupy ...
Feb 2, 2007 -
Re: Life is Like Playdough
I like! It's got big serious ideas in it, but you stop it sounding overly pretentious by using "playdough". Very clever, and rather neat.
Feb 2, 2007 -
Re: The Real Story of the Three Lil' Pygz
There are so many adaptations of the 3 Little Pigs story out there that it's quite nice to find one not trying to be hillariously satirical. You've got the style ...
Feb 2, 2007 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Hi, I'm the Gambler. I'm 15, and have been writing for a long time. I'm currently into light-hearted satire stuff, but I used to write pretty much everything.
Feb 2, 2007
